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Post by Dovetail and company on Aug 9, 2006 19:07:01 GMT -5
Name: Dovetail
Age: 15 Moons
Clan: SkyClan
Rank: Warrior
Gender: she-cat
Picture (optional): no
Description: Dovetail has black outline of a dove for a birth mark and she is proud of it. she has a Grey speck on her tail. she is a white cat. Dovetail is an almost pure white kitty but with a little color here and there. and has a sweet ring to her name she has blue eyes that sparkle with love and caring
Personality: she loves a good nature walk and enjoys playing with you as she acts like a kit still but she is pleased all the same. she loves to talk with you but most of all she is good natured. she wouldn't attack you if you attacked her but if you go after her kits you must defend your self or it will hurt
History: Dovetail is a clan cat she is healthy and sweet but more like someone you don't want to meet near her cubs. she loves a lot but also doesn't like to much. she loves to play around. so you could call her a kit still but that would make her mad. she loves her clan and mostly her kits if she had any but she would love to be alone for a while longer. she loves to eat with friends and sometimes sleeps in to make her look like an angel when she sleeps
Secret Word Find this in the rules. Apprentice
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Post by Moonie~My Internet is workin~ on Aug 9, 2006 19:21:23 GMT -5
ummm. Sorry:
Not Accepted here's why:
#1.These Cats are supposed to be REALISTIC A.."she has a blue crest of a lions mane on her back" NO. No Blue, No Crest, No Lion Mane B.."She has a green ring over her tail" Yet again, no Green! No out-of-the-ordiniary color like: Pink Blue Green Purple Rinbow.. ETC
#2.Please use correct gramar. We do not call our kitties by their first 1/2 of their warrior name... No Moonie, Dove, Split..ETC
#3. Please use correct punctiantion and gramar
#4.Please do not start ALL sentences, acually, not really any with she. Please take the 5 seconds to wite out "Dovetail"
#5.LONGER, LONGER, LONGER This Bio Needs To be longer in the history!
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Post by Dovetail and company on Aug 9, 2006 19:23:17 GMT -5
sorry im kinda new at this again for a long time i have been so yeah i am sorry
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Post by ==Splitstar== on Aug 9, 2006 19:34:06 GMT -5
That's okay. Accepted.
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Post by Dovetail and company on Aug 9, 2006 19:53:10 GMT -5
thank you
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